Paridhi Agarwal - I made it flood
Sep. 1st, 2013 11:54 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
highlyeccentricI made it flood
There’s mud in my sandals.
The ocean hitched a ride to our main road. I hope you took
the long passage on a bridge of unfaltering water this time.
I took a walk outside and it rained, I said, nettled, because
it still was. I didn’t realise you’d write a religion about it.
I’m sorry. I didn’t read the weather forecast, so I didn’t think
to ask — is there a deluge happening inside you?
I can't decide if the first line as printed at inkscrawl is the title or the first line or both. I prefer it as both. Also I can't help reading this as somehow about sex.
There’s mud in my sandals.
The ocean hitched a ride to our main road. I hope you took
the long passage on a bridge of unfaltering water this time.
I took a walk outside and it rained, I said, nettled, because
it still was. I didn’t realise you’d write a religion about it.
I’m sorry. I didn’t read the weather forecast, so I didn’t think
to ask — is there a deluge happening inside you?
I can't decide if the first line as printed at inkscrawl is the title or the first line or both. I prefer it as both. Also I can't help reading this as somehow about sex.