I was under the impression her name was Hel, not Hell. We are talking the daughter of Loki, aren't we? With one half of inexplicable beauty and sensuality, the other a decaying lump of dead flesh. Mistress of the dead?

I like it. I like the way you introduce her, bit by bit, like she's being written as we enter the story; appropriate seeing as she was re-written as we, a people over time, told her story.

:)