Um. I would, except that I'm so sick of the damn thing that I don't want to work on it any more! Also I have hang-ups about letting people see my stuff, so it's not that I don't want you to see it.

So yeah. I might end up wanting you to look over some other stuff later, just not this because I'm completely over having anything to do with renaissance Italy for a while.

And I did go over it veeery carefully myself, so I don't think there's anything too heinous in it edit-wise.